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Emily Dann Great start for your reel Dawn! I have lots of small suggestions to make this even stronger. I think you can cut out about 10 seconds from what’s...Great start for your reel Dawn! I have lots of small suggestions to make this even stronger. I think you can cut out about 10 seconds from what’s here with these edits. Only use one of the “feathers” dance segments (I like the 2nd one better for the lighting - but I see Grover likes the first one), delete at least two of the turn sequences and split them up so they’re not one after the other. When you show any technique, don’t include the prep… especially on turns. Fractional edits make a huge difference when we see you already in motion. Start your reel with a headshot and end with a zoom on a full body shot. Your photos are beautiful, so include them for open and closing (but not in between). For the clips at 0:52 and 1:06, choose your favorite and delete one. It’s best not to include a telephone number - Your email or website is better. Move one of the Salsa clips in the gold costume closer to the front. You look great in that, so show it closer to the beginning. I hope that’s not too much, but this is a strong first version! Show more 4 years ago
Grover Dale YES. It's getting stronger. Good edits. Keep going. Be fearless. Remember.....less is more. 4 years ago